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TOPIC: "Sarah Palin Sends Out Fundraising Appeal With Grammatical Error" (US News & World Report - Mobile blog 2/9/10)


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Sarah Palin Sends Out Fundraising Appeal With Grammatical Error

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Posted February 09, 2010 05:31 PM ET

By Robert Schlesinger, Thomas Jefferson Street blog

Sarah Palin's official PAC has pulled in more than $2.1 million this election cycle and spent $1.2 million (almost none of it on federal candidates for office, of which more in a moment), so you'd think she could afford to hire someone who can write her fundraising letters in grammatically correct English. Or at least she could get a competent proofreader. Apparently not: Here, in part, is an E-mailed fundraising appeal from the former Alaska governor on behalf of Sarah PAC (emphasis mine):

Dear Supporter,

Last month marked the one-year anniversary of Sarah PAC, and I want to personally extend to you my sincere thanks for your support and our shared goals of common sense solutions and values. It's been an incredible year and 2010 brings us the opportunity to continue that success.

In this pivotal election year, we have an opportunity to focus our direction and spread the ideals on which our Nation was founded. There are ripe opportunities in campaigns across the Country and winning these races will be our focus. Thirty-seven Governorships, one third of the United States Senate, and the entire House of Representatives is up for election. There are State Senate and State Legislature races where only a few seats mean the difference between more of what we have seen or what we share as a vision for this great Country.

For those of you who need remedial English, that should be "... are up for election." No doubt I'll be accused of being an elitist and a pedant (and who but an elitist would use the word "pedant"?) for noting this, but I don't think it's unfair to expect national leaders' written missives to follow the basic rules of grammar. In fairness to Palin, she presumably didn't write the letter herself; and in fairness to her staffer, Microsoft Word's grammar checker missed the mistake, which goes to show you can trust such devices only so far.

The note goes on to ask that readers renew their support for Sarah PAC (in other words, give money) because "your continued support is critical to provide the ability to support those candidates and campaigns in all areas of our Nation." That's somewhat amusing, given that, as I mentioned above, her PAC has spent $1.2 million thus far but hasn't donated much at all to federal candidates. To be precise, Sarah PAC has contributed $43,000 to candidates. Or to put it another way, her PAC spent more on copies of Going Rogue than it did on Republicans seeking elective office. (Emphasis added)

It will be interesting to see whether candidate contributions make up a larger portion of the money Sarah PAC spends as the election draws closer.

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The grammatical mistake is a glaring one. It is not even a frequently made mistake.

The PAC spent more on promoting her book than other political candidates.

Disappointing.

She really cannot afford this type of mistakes anymore.


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Geez, this and the writing on the palm .  It's all  a bit much.



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rachel wrote:

Geez, this and the writing on the palm .  It's all  a bit much.



Yes, she has been quite disappointing.  She is in a glass house. Tough place from which to toss stones.  She's got to be on her A game every time, in every way.

That note on the palm - she tried to hide it - make it not noticeable.  Any one who has been at the mic knows to not do that.  Unfortunately this appearance by Sarah Palin was tantamount to a test and she needed to cheat on simple 4 items that would be the core of a campaign platform.  She could have brought a note card.  It would have been totally professional, provided she also cut out the 'hopey changey workin' out for ya" expression.

Disappointment twice in a row does not engender much confidence in her; if anything it has depleted what confidence I did have.

The worst part is the money from PAC going to promoting book. That is very different from the promised focus of the PAC which is to promote certain segment of candidates/ideology.

Another big thing that is concerning me lately is the complete absence of any mention of "governing from the center" - something she emphasized in 2008; in fact quite the contrary. Given multiple chances by Chris Wallace, Palin came across as extremely conservative on the social scale. Troubling.


-- Edited by Sanders on Tuesday 9th of February 2010 09:35:47 PM

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